奇文共赏之英语作文
以下是来自一名同学的英语考试作文和其翻译，试赏析：（拼写错误确实没绷住。）
With all my body and soul, I dragged him into a flight of stairs. His trembling breath withered, but his eyes were tearful. I shouted: "What the hell aren't you doing?" He finally calmed down, and crossed his hand under the back of his head, then muttered: "You made my head swim! Didn't you detect the mental labor of me?" I gathered my wits and turned his stomach inside out. Of course, I worshiped his stepfather to avoid the taboos, and I saw the modest liquid. I moaned: "A stomach filled with bitter water. Why can't you terrify the overpowering consequence?" He replied simply: "But I'm paralyzed. Couldn't you give way to my jealous stomach?" As the dialog continues, dusk coming and dawn coming, time flied away as if it had rosy wings, and eventually I tumbled down to his stomach. He lost not a moment and murmured: "I can't bear this any more, can't you?" I sighed and said: "You'd better straighten up on your feet." He hugged his stomach to his breast and craved me. I'm of no consequence and bargaining with him.
At length, what a eventful day!
我用尽全身的力气，把他拖进了楼梯。他颤抖的气息渐渐萎靡，眼睛里却含着泪水。我喊道：“你到底在干什么？”他终于冷静下来，用手捂住后脑勺，然后喃喃自语道：“你把我的头弄晕了！你没发现我的脑力劳动吗？”我振作精神，把他的肚子翻了个底朝天。当然，为了避讳，我拜了他的继父，看到了那不多的液体。我呻吟着：“肚子里装满了苦水。为什么你就不能惧怕那可怕的后果呢？”他简单地回答：“但我瘫痪了。你就不能给我嫉妒的胃让路吗？”随着对话的继续，黄昏来了，黎明又来了，时间仿佛长了一双玫瑰色的翅膀飞走了，最终我倒在了他的胃里。他不失时机地喃喃自语：“我再也受不了了，你呢？”我叹了口气说：“你最好站直了。”他把肚子抱在胸前，渴望着我。我无动于衷，和他讨价还价。
总之，今天真是多事之秋！
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With all my body and soul, I dragged him down a flight of stairs. His trembling breath was gone, but his eyes were full of tears. I screamed: "What the hell are you doing?" He finally calmed down and put his hand under the back of his head, then mumbled: "You made my head swim! Didn't you notice my mental work?" I gathered my wits and turned his stomach inside out. Of course, I worshipped his stepfather to avoid the taboos, and I saw the humble liquid. I groaned: "A stomach full of bitter water. Why can't you be afraid of the overwhelming consequence?" He simply replied, "But I'm paralyzed. Couldn't you give way to my jealous stomach?" As the dialogue continued, dusk and dawn came, time flew away as if it had rosy wings, and finally I fell on his belly. He did not lose a moment and murmured: "I can't stand it anymore, can you?" I sighed and said: "You'd better get up on your feet." He held his stomach to his chest and longed for me. I'm of no importance and bargain with him.
Finally, what an eventful day!