托福写作模板
学姐模板
new version:
The reading materials and the professor highlight various opposing perspectives revolving around the… . The article first delineates/describes/elaborates on this phenomenon/theory with three main arguments, all of which the professor in the lecture rebuts against one by one with specific deliberation according to his distinct viewpoints.
First and foremost, the author begins by illustrating that… He then further reinforces this opinion with supplementary details about… The delineation provided by the author is then challenged by the professor who claims that the phenomenon/reality is, however, attributed by other factors. He supports his view by bringing forward facts/reasoning that…
Subsequently, the author also discusses over how… Such fact can relate to … On the opposing side, the professor expressed his objections because based on his observation…
Last by not least, the author brings into limelight that… He also embellishes his claim by denoting a couple of details over… Such description is again rebutted by professor’s line of reasoning. Indubitably against the writer’s interpretation, professor clarifies that…
old version:
Both the author of the reading material and the professor numerate several credible explanations/hypotheses in regards to ____. However, the arguments the article brings to light are all debunked by the professor’s line of reasoning respectively.
Firstly, the reading passage begins by mentioning that . Such deliberation is challenged by the professor who claims that the phenomenon/theory can be attributed by other factors. He then reinforces his position further by elaborating on .
Secondly, the reading passage cites the fact that . Adamantly opposing to the explanation, the professor expresses his distinct viewpoint that .
Finally, the reading passage illustrates that . Indubitably against the author’s interpretation, the professor denotes the description put forth by the author through clarifying that . To further embellish his thought, he highlights his own reasoning that ____.
学校模板：
Integrated Task
The author of the reading material believes that . However, the professor’s lecture is against the reading passage and holds the opinion that .
Firstly, the reading passage begins by mentioning that . However, the professor suggests that .
Secondly, the reading passage cites the fact that . But the professor explains that .
Finally, the reading passage explains that . Nevertheless, the professor rebuts this by pointing out that .
Independent task
It is well acknowledged that . Some protestors claim that . As far as I am concerned, I hold the same view.
Firstly, 支持观点1，深入解释支持观点1（论证法：因果论证+解释说明）。写一句引入观点的话，举例论证
Furthermore, 支持观点2。深入，对比论证的一边，对比论证的另一边（古今，有无对比）
支持3，深入，各种方法论证（深入解释，因果，举例，对比）
Conclusion: Restatement of my view 观点，Reasons 原因，Development sentence 扩展
让步段：
A+/A-：A-具体解决措施
A/B：B的小范围试用+短期利益
举例论证 exemplification
Topic sentence: clear & specific
Develop sentence: explain topic sentence
Example: subject, process, result, conclusive sentence
对比论证 contrast：
Topic sentence
A+细节VS A-细节
A细节VS B细节
角度：
Team, mind, socialization, rights, environment, employment, culture, money, trust, skill, competition, pressure, responsibilities, health, efficiency, tradition, enjoyment
主题：
小主题：people, students, friends, parents, teachers, workers, consumers, users
大主题：government, company, university/schools, community, society, culture
逻辑关联词P71
开始：first of all, in the first place, at the beginning, to begin with
递进：in addition, what’s more, besides, furthermore, moreover
因果：for, because, as, since, due to, owing to, because of, so, therefore, consequently, as a result, hence, thus
举例：take … for example, for instance
让步：although, though, even though, in spite of
对比：similarly, by contrast, in contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand
转折：however, but, while, nevertheless
结尾：in conclusion, to sum up, overall, in general, on the whole, in summary, to summarize, to conclude
The general public: 大众
Admittedly: 诚然
让步：admitted by……
之前的：
Introduction Background information: tracing the source; questioning words; present situation It is well acknowledged that …… Rephrasing the topic: synonym; phrase; sentence Some protestors claim that …… Writing personal opinion I agree with this idea. As far as I am concerned, I hold the same view. Although ……, I believe that …… In spite of ……, I think that ……
Body paragraph: Topic sentence: Admittedly, …… However, …… Supporting sentence: Firstly, …… Furthermore, ……. 深入解释，因果，举例，对比